ext_146382 ([identity profile] simone7418.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] raynedanserwrites 2008-12-06 01:12 am (UTC)

Once again your attention to detail makes every scene so clear in my mind. It's great. The school and the attendance book, that was completely creepy and so sad at the same time. The mysterious little girl ghost.

I like how you're weaving the past/present in together. It's not an easy task to pull off but you're doing it very well.

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