Bassez - prompted by [livejournal.com profile] msktrnanny

Oct. 3rd, 2006 09:44 pm
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So last weekend I'm at my son's football game. And I'm trying, I really am, but I need something besides the game... So I texted [livejournal.com profile] msktrnanny and asked her for a pairing and a prompt. And this is what I came up with. . .

Popslash / Bassez / Rain ~380 words
Beta'ed by the ever wonderful [livejournal.com profile] bayouskye

Lance stood in the open doorway, a mug of steaming coffee held in each hand. He smiled and leaned a shoulder against the door frame and watched. It was something he never seemed to be able to get enough of - watching JC while he was working and completely oblivious to the world around him.

JC sat at the piano, perched precariously on the edge of the seat. Spread out in front of him and in a haphazard pile on the bench next to him were loose sheets of paper covered in notes. A pencil was tucked behind one ear and he held another. Lance chuckled softly. He knew without looking that JC probably had his tongue curled out of the corner of his mouth with his brow wrinkled in intense concentration.

Outside, heavy rain fell against the windows. Bright bursts of lightening lit the room and was quickly followed by rolling thunder every few minutes. The wind had picked up and whipped the tree branches against the panes of glass.

When JC sighed, and then combed his fingers through his tangled hair, Lance knew it was time for him to take a break. Lance stepped away from the doorway and quietly crossed the room. He knew JC wasn't aware of him until him dropped onto the bench and gently bumped shoulders.

"Time for a break, don't you think?" Lance asked as he offered JC a mug. He wasn't surprised when JC shook his head no.

"The notes are right there," JC insisted.

"JC, you're trying too hard. Relax. Let them come to you."

Outside, it began to rain harder. Lance smiled as an idea occurred to him. He took JC's hand in his own and tugged gently. "Come on," Lance insisted.

JC stood and let Lance lead him out to the back patio and he looked at Lance in confusion. "Lance, I - " he began.

Lance lightly pressed his lips to JC's. "Shhh."

And then Lance stepped back and watched. Watched as JC closed his eyes and tipped his head back. Watched as the rain drops clung to JC's eyelashes, the loose curls of his hair. Watched as JC opened his eyes again and a smile lit up his face.

"I got it," he said.

Date: 2006-10-04 01:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msktrnanny.livejournal.com
Oh! That's fabulous! Great job!

Date: 2006-10-04 01:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raynedanser.livejournal.com
*whew* Thank you! So glad you liked it. :D

Date: 2006-10-04 01:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] musiclover03.livejournal.com
That was beautiful :) yay! :)

Date: 2006-10-04 01:50 am (UTC)

Date: 2006-10-04 01:53 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bellamyrose.livejournal.com
Beautiful imagery. Love helpful!Lance knowing when JC needs something more to help him get the song right. Just perfect.

Date: 2006-10-04 02:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raynedanser.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. :D *hugs you tight*

Date: 2006-10-04 03:06 am (UTC)
ext_8630: guh, ink + skin = ded (Default)
From: [identity profile] bellamyrose.livejournal.com
*nods* I did, and I normally don't even like Bassez. :D

*snuggles*

Date: 2006-10-04 10:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raynedanser.livejournal.com
Oooh, even better! Thanks love. :D

Date: 2006-10-04 02:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] roseincognitus.livejournal.com
That was lovely!

Date: 2006-10-04 02:06 am (UTC)

Date: 2006-10-04 06:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinycuba.livejournal.com
Oh, so pretty! :: JC ::

Date: 2006-10-04 10:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raynedanser.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2006-10-04 09:56 am (UTC)
pensnest: Lance and JC all fluffy and pretty, caption 'beaux' (C-Bass)
From: [personal profile] pensnest
That's delightful. JC distracted by what's whirling in his head, and needing to break to let it flow - *so* believable.

Date: 2006-10-04 10:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raynedanser.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2006-10-04 06:39 pm (UTC)
nopseud: (pairings -- kittenfish -- nopseud)
From: [personal profile] nopseud
Oh, that was very nice. I love thunderstorms, and Bassez, and the combination was gorgeous. Beautiful image of JC standing in the raim.


(One thing -- you have the thunder and lightning happening the wrong way around.)

Date: 2006-10-04 06:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raynedanser.livejournal.com
Thank you!

And oooh, you know? The whole time I was writing it, something about that bit kept bugging me and I couldn't put my finger on WHY. That has to be it.

*scrambles to fix*
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Date: 2006-10-04 10:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raynedanser.livejournal.com
*points to icon*

That's Lance 3 years ago (ish). He really is gay, btw (for random trivia).

Date: 2006-10-04 10:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raynedanser.livejournal.com
And that is JC. About a year ago. :D
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Date: 2006-10-04 10:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raynedanser.livejournal.com
*grins* You're very welcome. I adore them both. Truly very much so. They are each so beautiful in their own way and yeah... I could go on and on. ;-)

Oh look. JC again. ;-)
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Date: 2006-10-04 10:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raynedanser.livejournal.com
Oh but you must. . . . ;-)

Date: 2006-10-04 10:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] krankykittie.livejournal.com
Wheeee...This makes me so happy! :)

Great job. Lance always takes care of his man!

Date: 2006-10-04 10:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raynedanser.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2006-10-07 12:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wendy.livejournal.com
So pretty and sweet. *smooches*

Date: 2006-10-07 12:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raynedanser.livejournal.com
ooooh, naughty JC. Nice choice. ;-)

And thanks sweetie! *smooches back*

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