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Prison Break / Michael/Sucre / Everything ~ 355 words
Written for [livejournal.com profile] motioncity44's Second S/S challenge
My prompt was the reason why I burst and why I bloom. I hope I did it justice hon.

Michael stared ahead through the dusty windshield, lips pressed together as he lost himself in his thoughts. Linc drove along the dirt track as fast as the road conditions and the old car allowed, dust swirled in thick clouds behind them.

No one had said anything for several miles, something for which Michael was grateful. Sara, as though sensing Michael's feelings, had fallen silent first. Michael knew this wasn't easy for her - how could it be? - and he admired her strength. She didn't have to be here, and yet – here she was.

Michael was dozing lightly as the car slowed to a stop. He opened his eyes and sat up. "We there?" he asked, instantly awake.

"According to the half assed directions you got from your boy. Yes." Linc shut the car off, but left the key in the ignition. He twisted and reached into a cooler in the back seat, grabbed two water bottles and got out of the car.

Michael followed Lincoln around to the rear of the car and leaned against the trunk. He took the offered water bottle from his brother and had it half drained when Lincoln cleared his throat. Michael lowered the bottle, blinked and smiled broadly at the figure walking towards them.

"Papi," he said quietly.

Michael was rewarded with a smile he was sure matched his own. "Fish," Sucre answered as he stopped right in front of Michael.

Michael curled long fingers around the back of Sucre's neck and pulled him close. His mouth found Sucre's and he kissed him slowly. It had been far too long and Michael knew his uncertainty showed. He was rewarded when Sucre moaned softly and he parted his lips parted beneath Michael's.

When Michael pulled back, Sucre's eyes were dark with desire and he left is hands on Michael's hips. "Never again," Michael whispered.

"Que?"

Michael smiled again and kissed Sucre quickly. "You. You're not ever leaving my sight again," he clarified.

And he kissed Sucre again, this time putting everything he'd had to hold inside the last few weeks, everything he'd wanted to say into it.

- fini
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Date: 2007-03-07 01:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raynedanser.livejournal.com
mwahaha! We should be so lucky. This is how *I* would love to see them reunited. ;-) Because you know they're gonna... *sigh*
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Date: 2007-03-07 01:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raynedanser.livejournal.com
Thanks sweetie! :D

Date: 2007-03-07 05:13 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
This is great - I love it.

Feeling a bit disgruntled with the show at the moment - love the action/plot etc but hey how about some LERV??? between anyone??? please???? What you've written fits the bill perfectly lol.

From Louise.

Date: 2007-03-11 12:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pixeestyx.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for the terrific feedback. It's only the second time I've written S/S so this was greatly appreciated. :D (well, it's ALWAYS appreciated *g*)
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Date: 2007-03-19 01:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raynedanser.livejournal.com
Thank you! I don't write S/S very often, so I get nervous posting when I do. ;-)

Date: 2007-03-20 10:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] apsik.livejournal.com
I toally love this ficlet - S/S is one thing, but the fact that you made Sara stay with them? I totally appreciate that :] *hugs*

Date: 2007-03-20 11:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raynedanser.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! :D And I appreciate the feedback. :D

(I have more bunnies, which is frightening. :D )

Date: 2007-03-21 06:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] apsik.livejournal.com
oh, no, don't be afraid! Write, write! Plot Bunnies might have insane, red eyes and sharp, pointy teeth, but their still (mostly) harmless fluffy creatures! Really! :P

Date: 2007-03-21 11:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raynedanser.livejournal.com
LMAO!!! Good point. :D

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