real Person: ricky Martin

[raynedanserwrites]

Title: Inside Out
Fandom: real person: ricky martin
Pairing: Ricky/ Not Specified
Prompt: 071 - broken
Word Count: 185
Rating: G
Author's Notes: darkseaglass asked for fic based on this picture:


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He closed the door to the small, windowless room, braced himself in the corner and slid down the wall. This was it, it was over. Everything he’d been trying so hard to gain was gone.

He tucked his feet up and wrapped his arms around them, hugging them tight, and tipped his head down, forehead to knees. One breath at a time, he forced himself to breath slowly. His stomach was twisted around itself and he forced himself to keep its contents down. He held onto his knees tightly, squeezed his eyes closed even more tightly and willed himself not to think, if only for a short time.

Eventually, he slept. His sleep was filled with random images and strange dreams influenced by the day’s events. The soft creak of the door as it swung on its hinges eventually woke him.

He lifted his head, stared at the figure in the doorway. Watched as the other man crossed the small space and crouched next to him. Surrendered when strong arms wrapped around him and held him close. Hiccuped as the tears finally started to come.

Comments

[darkseaglass.livejournal.com]

I love it. Really nicely done. Now I want the next installment. Who/what/why?

[pixeestyx.livejournal.com]

*cackles* so do I. :-D

I'm. . . working on it. ;-)

[mickeym.livejournal.com]

you're a greedy wench, aren't you? *g*

[raynedanser.livejournal.com]

See? Do yuo see what I go through here???

[mickeym.livejournal.com]

Dude, I get it, too ;) I'm thinking we should look upon this as a compliment *g*



Look! I have one of those 'Love is...' icons, too *g*

[adinda.livejournal.com]

More... MORE! MORE!!

This is gorgeous, I've always loved this video. I swear it's the sequel to the Perdido Sin Ti video. So much pain and emotion, but so beautiful.

MORE!!

[raynedanser.livejournal.com]

There will be. *g* I'm just trying to figure out exactly what the more will be. Like what fell apart and who the other man is and and and and...

*ponders*

[darkseaglass.livejournal.com]

There will be.

Good!

Like what fell apart and who the other man is

He finally got caught, somewhere and somehow he couldn't grease the right palms to buy off the photographer? And the other man is the man that he left for the man he got caught with?

[raynedanser.livejournal.com]

*blink* will that make more sense if I've had coffee? I think I can follow that. lol

[darkseaglass.livejournal.com]

I sort of thought it was the sequel to Vuelve. I thought it was about Rebecca. But mostly I just love Richard Bravo's cameo as the guy who takes Ricky's girl. Siempre la bateria, claro?

[faithette.livejournal.com]

wow

just...

wow

[raynedanser.livejournal.com]

Good wow, I hope?

[musiclover03.livejournal.com]

Woah with the imagery :) Nice work girlie :) and nice pic suggestion

[raynedanser.livejournal.com]

Thanks sweetie. It started out because, surprise surprise, I'd been iconing. And I showed her. And we discussed me writing fic based on icons and she chose that icon. And that's what I saw when I closed my eyes. NOW, if I could fill the gaps before and maybe after, I would be oh so very happy. *g*

[musiclover03.livejournal.com]

simple..find other pics LOL you can do eet!

[raynedanser.livejournal.com]

hee! I have some ideas, mostly fed by darkseaglass (boy she gets blamed for a lot), so let's see if I can make them work.

[musiclover03.livejournal.com]

LOL she doesnt get blamed. More like she's responsible for bringing out these wonderful visions. :)

[raynedanser.livejournal.com]

True. :-D

[darkseaglass.livejournal.com]

*Smiles big* I am such an enabler. ;-)

[musiclover03.livejournal.com]

LOL nawww you're a .... plot bunny breeder :O) yes thats it!

because...yes!

[raynedanser.livejournal.com]

heee! Love it!

[raynedanser.livejournal.com]

But do you hear me complaining? Really? *g*

[becky-h.livejournal.com]

I like this- both in that it's inspired as much by a pic as a prompt, and of course that it's painful in a very real way.

You're going to ease me back into RPS. Thanks. *G*

[raynedanser.livejournal.com]

Thank you! The video I got the cap from (Y Todo Queda en Nada) has some amazing imagery in it. The one shot is just so damn powerful and it sort of went from there.

You're going to ease me back into RPS. Thanks. *G*

Hee! You're welcome. *eg*

[becky-h.livejournal.com]

I'll have to look for the video. I am actually a complete music whore, and lately I've been realizing I don't have the kind of variety I used to. I never listen to the radio so it got harder to find stuff I like without expending some effort, and I apparently got lazy.

[raynedanser.livejournal.com]

I'd offer to upload it, but not on this connection. :-(

Ricky's last two albums (which includes his new "Life") are really really good, but I'm biased. *g* He could sing the phone book and I'd be happy.

[becky-h.livejournal.com]

He really does have an amazing voice- He's also really attractive. I foresee me iconing him for a game. Which is an odd sort of fangirlism by itself.

[raynedanser.livejournal.com]

He's absolutely beautiful and I've had a blast iconing him. Drooling over him. Take your pick. :-D

[darkseaglass.livejournal.com]

Hi Becky. AOL is not my bitch--I'm sorry I can't link you directly. But here: http://music.aol.com/artist/main.adp?tab=songvid&artistid=29272 under "Y Todo Queda en Nada." It's a beautiful, beautiful video.

[becky-h.livejournal.com]

Thank you, so much!

[raynedanser.livejournal.com]

Ohhh thank you sweetie for linking her. AOL is so not good on my end.. I never even thought of that.

[mickeym.livejournal.com]

Oh, OUCH. Dude. You're supposed to WARN me, when you're linking me to owwies!

*hugs* Very lovely :)

[raynedanser.livejournal.com]

Awwwww

*pets you*

[ravenbat.livejournal.com]

wow. there's a lot of emotion conveyed there, you've totally conveyed being "broken"

well done

[raynedanser.livejournal.com]

Thanks sweetums! :-D

[jstabe.livejournal.com]

This is gorgeous. Very powerful and emotional.

[raynedanser.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I got pleaded into writing a full length version of this for the before and after and am working on it now. hee!

[jstabe.livejournal.com]

*dances*

Yay! I would love to see more of this. I clicked on the link someone provided and watched the video. It's amazing.

[raynedanser.livejournal.com]

It really is. It's one of my absolute favorite songs of his.

The full fic is at 1100 words right now and I'm not even close to done. Maybe a fourth of the way? (this is the longest of anything I've done in quite a while) I've been pecking away at it off and on this weekend...